Maxine sat in church the next day as Mrs. Pearl stepped up to do the announcements. Mrs. Williams had spoken with Mrs. Pearl about Maxine’s decision, and Mrs. Pearl had agreed to announce it.
“Good morning, church family,” Mrs. Pearl smiled from the pulpit.
“Good morning,” came a general murmur from the pews.
After a brief introduction, Mrs. Pearl announced a death, a wedding shower, and, finally, Maxine’s baptism.
“Also,” Mrs. Pearl began, “I would like to announce that a wonderful decision has been made. Maxine Williams has decided to dedicate her life to the Lord.”
There was polite clapping all around Maxine, and her peers stared at her with smiles. She smiled herself.
“The baptism will take place at Lake Sanchez at 4:00 p.m. next Friday, the 12th, for those of you who don’t know,” Mrs. Pearl continued.
“Why aren’t you getting baptized here?” Maxine’s friend whispered from the pew behind her.
Maxine only shrugged. She didn’t feel like explaining.
The service ended, and many people came up and congratulated Maxine. None of them looked very confused. Some of the elderly people even seemed to think it had a touch of beautiful romance to it to be baptized in a rocky lake outside, just like Jesus had.
But when Friday came, Maxine was ready, standing by the lake shore with her grandfather. The congregation had gathered to watch this young lady become baptized, but Maxine could tell that most had been expecting Pastor Whitebrook. What they found was a wizened old man who they hardly knew. By being baptized outside the church by her grandfather, Maxine had jumped the dreaded hurdle.
I’ll become a member when I’m ready, she told herself. Right now, baptism is something different.
“Is this proper?” Mrs. Ebony asked Mrs. Williams quietly.
“My father was ordained,” Mrs. Williams shrugged, “and that’s conventional enough.”
Maxine’s baptism verse, 1 Timothy 4:12, was displayed on a TV screen her father had set up: “Don’t let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for the believers in speech, in conduct, in love, in faith and in purity.”
“Maxine,” Maxine’s grandfather said, making eye contact as they waded into the water, “you’ve made the decision to follow your Lord no matter where you go, where He leads you, or what situations you find yourself in. It won’t always be easy, and my prayer for you is that God gives you the strength to stay true to your commitment and, most importantly, to Him. And now I baptize you…”
Maxine’s heart pounded and her eyes filled with tears as her grandpa’s strong arm wrapped itself around her waist and his hand reached to the sky.
Lord, she prayed silently, help what Grandpa’s saying to come true. Thank you for helping me figure this out. I, I really have nothing more to say.
Maxine’s “amen” never came, and she never wanted to say “amen” again in her life. She never wanted to end the prayer. She felt her body tip, and the water enveloped her for a moment. Nothing felt different when she came up, but Maxine knew she would be different. She’d promised herself that a week ago. And now everyone else knew it too.
I can’t truly say that this is the end. For Maxine, it’s a new beginning. So I guess what I should say is…
THE BEGINNING

17 thoughts on “The King’s Kid – The Baptism”
nice story jojo
Thank you, joshua26! I haven’t seen yours yet, but I’ll looking forward to it.
Yay!! She was baptized! I’m so happy for Maxine…that she finally felt confident in her decision and went through with it! I also love what you did there at the end with “the beginning.” 😉
I’m glad that you got the different emotions Maxine was going through, MiyaK!
jojo, keep writing. God does have big plans for you.keep using the talents God gave you to praise God 😀🙏
Thank you, joshua26! That means a lot more than you know right now. I’m going into different stuff with writing, trying new things I’ve never done before, so thanks for your encouragement!
you are very welcome
JOJO YOU COOKED WITH THIS STORY!!!!!!! I’m a little jealous that your story got story of the week and I have never got that. But I have to keep the 10th commandment. BUT YOU COOKED! I have been reading your series since it has started. WHAT A FINALE! Keep It UPPPPP!
PS. Can we be BFFS? pls? 🙂
lol sure, LegoSophia, we live in the same state anyways. Thanks so much! Honestly, I was kinda shocked to see this as story of the week. You are an amazing writer, LegoSophia, and if anyone deserves front page it’s you!
Wait. YOU LIVE IN THE SWEET GREAT LAKES MICHIGAN?!?!?!?!?!?! If your in a Pathfinder club, TELL ME WHICH ONE! I could see you at Pathfinder fair!!!!!!!! And thank you for that nice comment, Jojo! 😉
I sure do! I’m in the Pioneers, but you’ll forgive me if I don’t disclose the town name. I’m sure you’ll be able to find it! But I have a dance recital the weekend of the fair this year, and then I’m on a world history trip so I might not be able to go to the one in September, and we’ll see about the next fair… But anyhoo, I guess we just keep visiting the campsites until we bump into each other? But it would be so cool to see a fellow guidester face-to-face! You’re welcome for the comment, by the way.
YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yayyyyyyyyyyy
My story got story of the week one time
Yeah, I saw that one!
Me to!
Good story Jojo as always!
Thank you, AmyNicole! Writing’s really fun for me and I love getting to share this stuff with other people.