Birds
Flying high
In the sky
Winged goals
Take their bows.
Perched
On a birch
They sing
Their voices ring.
Birds
18 Oct 2024
Post By guide girl
Birds
Flying high
In the sky
Winged goals
Take their bows.
Perched
On a birch
They sing
Their voices ring.
3 thoughts on “Birds”
And FYI, there’s a typo in the poem. ‘Goals’ is supposed to be ‘fowls’
Well done, guidegirl! I’m not an expert on poetry, but I love how there was a clear rhythm throughout the piece. And the rhymes were great! I know how tough it is to find rhymes for each line that make sense
I’d just want to see a few more lines to give the end of the poem some finality.
Keep it up!
Thank you !