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Song I wrote comment if you like it 2 years 4 months ago #48004

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Here's a song I just made up like, 45 minutes ago. Hope you enjoy!

Original piece by 12pearlygates B) ;)



I've been so horrible lately
Ignoring You
Never thought I'd end up here
Shivering
And cold because
I didn't heed your word
But You came to me
You looked at me
And You rescued me
And I thought You would leave me
But You didn't and now

Bridge

Never Leave Me, God
Never Forsake Me, God
I'll never be the same if You do
Never Leave Me, God
Never Forsake Me, God
I'm begging You
Never Leave Me, God
I'll never be the same
If You do

Now I'm standing in my mess
Right in front of You
Too ashamed to even confess
All my greatest sins
Didn't wish to see this day
but I'm calling out to You
Anyway
So I stand here
And say


Bridge

Never Leave Me, God
Never Forsake Me, God
I'll never be the same if You do
Never Leave Me, God
Never Forsake Me, God
I'm begging You
Never Leave Me, God
I'll never be the same
If You do

RIff

So I plead before your eyes
'God, have mercy on me'
And it seems you didn't hear
My helpless cries
And I stand there
Thinking all is lost
Until You say

God's Answer

I'll Never Leave You
I'll Never Forsake You
You'll be the best with my grace
I'll Never Leave You
I'll Never Forsake You
You won't have to beg
I'll Never Leave You
You'll be the best by my grace

Finishing Touch

And I am reassured
By the warmth You give
And I realize
I don't have to plead
Cause You'll Never Leave Me
Nor Forsake Me
And I am at rest
Knowing that I'll turn out for the best
And I don't have to say
With a heavy heart
Fearing Hell
Never Leave Me, God
Anymore
Anymore

There you go!




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Song I wrote comment if you like it 2 years 4 months ago #48260

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Love It. (I can never right really good songs :()
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Song I wrote comment if you like it 2 years 4 months ago #48462

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I love it!!!! its awesome. keep it up. keep writing songs like this. it was amazing!!!! :) :)


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Song I wrote comment if you like it 1 year 11 months ago #53563

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Awesome song! You have some talent!
Are you going to sing that song? Or are you going play an instrument? (Or both?)
If you are can you post a recording?
Anyways, you are awesome keep writing. :lol:
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Song I wrote comment if you like it 1 year 7 months ago #56851

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Woah.... Thats impressive for only 45 minutes :ohmy:
it's really good!! Good job :lol:
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